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STAR FOX ARMAGEDON
This takes place after StarFox Command


It’s been 18 years since the events of Command when the entire team is at a funeral for a certain member.
Priest: Here lies General Peppy Hare a man with no limitations he fought off Andross
When James McCloud went missing in the black hole. Now to say a few words is one of Peppy’s best friends Fox McCloud.
Fox: I’ve known Peppy since I was very little I looked up to him and my father. And when my father went missing Peppy was there for me and so was my other friends Slippy, and Falco. They helped me in my time of need and I still need to pay them back. They helped me through the worst of times and the best of times.
Guy in crowd: COPYRIGHTED INFRINGMENT!!!!
Fox: SHUDUP!!!
And fox fires into the crowd and hears one scream from that man.
Fox: anyways thanks to them we killed Andross and it was mostly for Peppy’s advice.
Thank you.
Krystal: that was good Fox.
Fox: thanks.
Eight hours later after the funeral Fox receives a call from Falco.
Falco: hey buddy I haven’t seen you in a while. How’s the kid?
Fox: who? Marcus? He’s good he just graduated flight school faster then I did at the age of 16.
Falco: whoa you know Slippy called, his son wants to be in the StarFox team.
Fox: yea but Falco I disbanded the team remember?
Falco: no he wants to join Marcus’s team.
Fox: no I don’t want Marcus going out there doing dangerous stuff like we used to me and Krystal agreed on it.
Falco: wait you married Krystal?
Fox: yea over 17 years ago Falco didn’t you come to the wedding.
Falco: crap I thought you married Fara Phoenix I sent the congratulation cards to Fara; I was arrested because she thought I was stalking her Ha-ha.
Fox: man that’s the last time you go to an open bar wedding.
    Then Fox and Falco were on the phone for the rest of the night catching up on old times.
Fox: so you and Katt never made up huh?
Falco: nope we lost contact 5 years ago I was actually going to ask her out again but I hear rumors she is on a team with Bill and Dash.
Fox: o did you hear Dash and Bill were killed attacking an enemy convoy.
Falco: really?! Well they didn’t say anything about Katt.
Fox: I know. Aww man do you see how long we’ve been on the phone.
Falco: crap first I didn’t pay off the customization of my Arwing then my phone bill I can’t even pay my own house well do you have two refrigerator boxes.
Fox: Why?
Falco: I need to stack them and make a condo any ways see ya later bud.
Fox then went to sleep when his alarm woke him up three minutes later and fox woke up in misery since he got no sleep.
Krystal: hey honey you sleep well?
Fox: no.
Krystal: well im going to make us breakfast.
Fox: you do that.
That night fox had a dream were Andross had a second grandson named Andross II.
And everyone fox had loved was being killed before his eyes starting with Slippy then to Falco. Then before his dream finished Krystal woke him up.
Krystal: fox wake up Falco is here.
Fox: Falcos here.
Then fox went in the living room and saw Falco wide awake looking at the house.
Falco: geez buddy your house is cool who’d you have to kill to get this house.
Krystal: he doesn’t kill people Falco if you would have a good job you could have a house like this.
Falco: eh I don’t care, no one will give me a decent job the only job I can get is car crasher.
Fox…
With fox still half asleep he didn’t say a lot.
Fox: hey Falco what idiot told you Marcus was making his own team.
Falco: that’s stupid, Marcus did.
Krystal: no Marcus is not going to be a pilot.
Falco: Krystal you have to let the kid have some fun.
Fox: Falco we don’t want Marcus to get hurt.
Krystal: Falco how do you like your coffee?
Falco: black is fine.
So she’s a keeper isn’t she?
Fox: yea since the first time I saw her on Sauria.
Falco: I bet. I just wish I can see Katt again.
Fox: can you lay off Katt. I know she’s out there we’re going to find her and when she sees you she’ll go running to you.
Krystal: hey fox on the news they’re talking about Slippy.
Fox: Slippy? Falco turn on the television.
Falco: ok. Uhhhhh how do I use this remote?
Fox: press the big red button.
Falco: ok which channel?
Fox: 8294. Now quick.
Anchor Woman: we now bring you to Cornerian news. This is Trixie Tiger.
And this is Dan Panther.
Anchor Man: crap woman that isn’t my name. Ahem anyways we bring you to Slippy Toad’s house. Were Slippy was poisoned.
The only witnesses were his Spouse Amanda Toad, and his son Tony Toad.
Amanda: we were just in the living room when I went to get Slippy his Medicine when a dart came through the window and hit Slippy in the neck. It was bad.
Tony: bad.
Anchor Man: Slippy is still alive just in intensive care. Now we bring you to MacBeth’s Ambassador, Ambassador what’s his face.
What’s his face: my fellow people animal type thingies?
Krystal: what’s a person?
Fox: I don’t know Krystal.
Falco: sounds ugly.
What’s his face: I have found out that the ugly tyrant Oikony is behind all this. So I am Declaring war against Oikony. All able bodied people animal thingies from ages 18-28 to join the war. Thank you and just to tell you Marcus McCloud your pizza’s at the door just kidding you’ve been drafted into the war Marcus McCloud.
Fox: no it can’t be. Marcus he’s been drafted.
Falco: but what name is what his face sounds very lame is.
Fox: Falco stop fooling around.
Falco: well fox it was bound to happen you told Marcus all those stories of how you were the greatest pilot in the galaxy and he wants to follow your foot steps.
Fox: get out.
Falco: but fox I-.
Fox: I said get out!
After Falco left Fox felt terrible.
Fox: my god Falco’s right. It’s my entire fault Marcus he’s going to have to fight in this war.
Krystal: fox no it’s not your fault.
Fox: yes it is Krystal. Im going to find out what’s happening by any means necessary.
Krystal: where are you going?
Fox: like I said Krystal by any means necessary.
The rest of the day fox went around the entire city asking people about the war.
But fox didn’t find anything out so he went home to find that Krystal was already asleep. Fox then quietly went to bed knowing that there is a war coming.


StarFox Armageddon Pt2

After Ambassador what’s his face declared war on Oikony Fox felt down on himself because his only child Marcus has been drafted into war. But now fox is going to help Marcus in the war so fox is training again.
Commander: ok come on ladies 50 more pushups come on.
Fox: man thank god im not in this movie.
Krystal: fox you should be training if you want to go out there.
Fox: I am training im training my self to stop watching this crap.
Krystal: well if you’re going to stay inside im going to go visit Slippy and Amanda in the hospital. If you grow up or finally get tired of watching this come to the hospital. But I recommend you come visit Slippy he haven’t seen you since the attack he thinks you abandoned him.
Then fox got up to check if he has any more beer in the fridge when he gets a call from Falco.
Fox: hello?
Falco: hey buddy its me.
Fox: hey Falco.
Falco: well fox sorry about last week I didn’t know you would take it that hard.
Anyways I lost a gamble.
Fox: arg Falco you and gambling.
Falco: well it’s a big gamble it was if I won I’d get a new house but if I lose I have to join the war.
Fox: and you lost.
Falco: yea this might be the last time we talk these people are strict about who is in the war. If they’re over 28 they need a thorough physical. And yea we’re in our 30’s they probably won’t let you in though. Im just lucky, so is your son coming home today.
Fox: yea.
He said holding back his tears.
Falco: ask him if he likes the name StarFox.
Fox: wait before you go can we talk.
Falco: no im sorry bud im being brought to the base today and we’re not allowed to have outside conversations. But I will take care of Marcus I told the general that Marcus, Tony, and Casey to be in my team it’ll be just like when me you Slippy and Peppy were on a team well cya McCloud.
Fox: wait.
Falco: yes?
Falco said with surprise.
Fox: kick some ass for me.
Falco: will do Fox will do.
Then there was a dial tone and Fox hung up.
Then fox heard knocking on the door and went running he knew it wasn’t Krystal she has the key.
Then standing out the door was a blue fox Fox’s son to be exact.
Marcus: hey pops.
Fox: Marcus is that you?
Marcus: it’s been me for 16 years. So dad where is mom?
Fox: she’s at the hospital.
Marcus: well I do know mom wouldn’t get injured so who is she visiting?
Fox: well we need to talk.
Then fox told Marcus about all that has happened.
Marcus: I think it’s the entire Ambassador’s fault.
Fox: Marcus why would you say that?
Marcus: since Oikony found out he had a brother the Ambassador has been here.
Fox: so you think the Ambassador of the Planet Macbeth is evil?
Marcus: yes no doubt dad.
Fox: ok. Damn I wonder what’s taking your mother so long.
Marcus: she’s probably talking about woman stuff with Amanda.
Fox: I’d doubt it. She has been very chummy with her since those many years ago it was after the dark days of the StarFox team. Have I told you about those days?
Marcus: yes dad its how mom told you her true feelings about her then you threw her on the bed and you-.
Fox: hey-hey who told you that part?
Marcus: Falco of course.
Fox: damn that Falco. Geez he lies too much that part happened 2 years later.
Marcus laughed at the joke. Or was it?
Fox then got a phone call.
Krystal: hello?
Fox: hey honey.
Fox is able to tell just by hearing Krystal hum that Krystal is there.
Fox: anyways I take you didn’t get kidnapped or held hostage.
Krystal then giggled.
Krystal: no silly you know me more then that. I never get kidnapped.
Anyways Slippy’s is coming home now we’re bringing him and Amanda to our house to celebrate his recovery but he can’t move his feet or his left hand.
Fox: o that stinks. O yea Falco has been drafted into the war.
Krystal: why?
Fox: he gambled again but he accepted that he watches over Marcus during the war.
Marcus was in the other room and couldn’t hear him. Talking about the war coming.
Fox: and Marcus has come home
Krystal: ok and Tony and Casey are coming too.
Fox: Casey Hare? Lucy’s daughter?
Krystal: yea. Ok ill see you in an hour.
Later that night when they were all celebrating Slippy came up to fox.
Slippy: fox I know I don’t have long to live.
Fox: what I thought they cured you. Did they?
Slippy: yes but I know what’s going to happen in the war that near death experience gave me visions. Don’t let Marcus go into the war.
Fox: why?
Slippy: he’s going to die.
Fox: no please Slippy don’t talk about that I’ve lost way too many people I lost my Mother when I was only 3 my father at age 8. We just lost Peppy.
We almost lost you. When will you just accept that you shouldn’t be talking about this?
Now please just have some fun Slippy.
Then at that time Amanda came.
Amanda: hey fox are you harassing Slippy?
Fox: no I would never do that.
Then Amanda gave Slippy a kiss on the lips and left.
Fox: yea I can see why you didn’t spend much time with us back then.
Slippy: yea she made my life so much better together we have 5 kids.
Fox: then how come I only see Tony?
Slippy: he’s the only one who survived the accident
Slippy: yes quintuplets Tony is the oldest. It was three years ago my brother brought them to see a movie on Katina Tony didn’t have a good felling about it so he didn’t go with them. Two hours later we got news that their ship was assaulted by Oikony and since then Tony has been the only one no brothers or sisters and we cant have anymore children or it can kill Amanda. And im dead from the waist down.
Fox felt sorry for Slippy Tony was going to war. When every one left Fox went up to Marcus.
Fox: hey Marcus how do you like the name StarFox.



StarFox Armageddon Pt3

Later Fox and Krystal went to sleep that night. When Marcus was up late thinking of the war coming will he survive Marcus then finally fell asleep when we woke up instantly when he heard a gun outside. Marcus took his blaster and went outside to see what was happening and there he saw four Cornerians sprawled out on the ground. There was blood on their clothes and on the ground. Marcus went to see if they are all alive.
Three of them were dead and Marcus went to check the last one and the victim is none other then Wolf O’Donnell.
Wolf: <cough> hey your Fox McCloud’s son aren’t you?
Marcus: maybe I am. So would that make you the leader of StarWolf?
Wolf: yes <cough>.
Marcus: well I don’t think my mom or dad would like me helping you, you tried to kill my father many of times.
Wolf: yes but your father wouldn’t like leaving a man to die on the street. Am I right?
Marcus: yes but I won’t take you in my house you’re going to a federal hospital where after you recover you’re going to jail.
Wolf: fine do what you want.
Later a couple of ambulances came and some detectives. The lights woke up Fox and Krystal.
Fox: Marcus what are you doing?
Marcus: well I wanted to go to sleep but some one was shooting people out here three of them were killed the last one was only injured. You might know him, Wolf O’Donnell.
Krystal: oh-no Wolf is on Cornaria.
Fox: I thought we got him killed.
Detective: apparently not. See wolf told us that Andrew Oikony shot him and his wife and children. He’s the only one that survived the shooting.
Marcus: poor guy.
Krystal: come on boys come inside.
When they all went in side Krystal went upstairs to go to sleep when fox lay down on the couch to watch the news because Fox and Krystal don’t have a TV in their room.
     But eventually fox fell asleep. As did Marcus.
Then that night Fox had a dream where Krystal was captured by Oikony and he suck into the war and tried to save her. But in the dream he walked over a body and found it was Marcus, and then Fox woke up and saw that it was 5:30 and Fox went running upstairs to find that Krystal and Marcus were still asleep. Then Fox went down Stairs to sit in his chair and heard foot steps at the door and heard noises out side. He went to check and he saw nothing. So he went outside and saw some cats playing around.
Fox: cats? Oh god shoo.
The cats hissed and ran off.
Fox: man I hate cats.
Then Fox was looking around down in their basement and found some old photos. Some of them were his dad with his mom when they were still dating. Then one with him as a baby with his mom and dad. And on the back it said never forget 5/26/2651.
At that time Fox figured it was probably the day Andross tried to kill his father by rigging his car but his mother started the car and was killed. Then fox found a picture of the StarFox team before Falco left and the GreatFox went strait down the crapper.
Then fox went upstairs when he saw a Cornerian flight ship fly around. It was probably looking for Oikony’s goons. Then fox heard the alarm clock in his and Krystal’s room and heard it stop. He knew Krystal was awake. Fox heard Krystal walking down stairs.
Fox: hey Krystal.
Krystal just yawned and said Hi back to fox.
Fox: I already made some coffee.
Krystal: ok.
Fox: hey Krystal today everyone is going to war.
Krystal: that’s good dear.
Fox knew Krystal didn’t know what she was talking about. But later Krystal would know what Fox was talking about. An hour later after Krystal woke up a little. They talked a little.
Krystal: fox do you think Marcus will be ok?
Fox: yes Krystal. Don’t forget Falco will be there.
Krystal: ok fox.
Then after fox said that he heard Marcus coming down stairs.
Fox: hey Marcus.
Marcus: hey dad.
Krystal: I made your breakfast.
Marcus: thanks mom.
Then Krystal went and put her coat on.
Krystal: we need some groceries and I want to spend a lot of time with you guys so Im going now.
Fox: ok Krystal see you in a half hour.
Krystal walked out the door and Marcus stared at his food.
Fox: what you don’t like grilled rabbit shit.
Marcus: What?!
Fox: just kidding. Now eat your food.
Marcus then ate his food and went to get a shower. Hours past and Krystal still never came home. Then Tony came over to talk to Marcus.
Tony: so Marcus you going to do suicide missions or safe missions.
Marcus: Tony why do you have to be a dick?
Tony: Not my faults blame genetics. Hey isn’t your mom supposed to be home right now?
Marcus: yea what gives she wanted to stay home today.
Hours later the convoy to take all the people to the war finally came.
Fox: Marcus good luck!
Marcus: thanks dad.
Amanda: Tony kill some Bitches!
Tony: ok mom.
Then after the ship left Fox walked home hopefully to find Krystal.
But still no Krystal but instead a note. That said we have your wife if you don’t participate in this war McCloud we kill her. Its equivalent exchange you killed my uncle so I kill your wife. Signed Oikony.
Fox: shit the convoy left now what do I do? Man my Arwing is back at Dexter’s Diner.
Crap I hope Dex didn’t sell it.
Dexter: sold it.
Fox: you sold it?!
Dexter: yes.
Fox: Dex I need my Arwing or Oikony will kill Krystal.
Dexter: ahhh the blue vixen whom you married because that slut Fara Phoenix wouldn’t join you.
Fox: no the Cernian fox that I married because I love her.
Dexter: well I do have her Arwing.
Fox: good ill take it.
Dexter: no-no-no-no-no if you go out there you WILL be killed.
You need a Blaster, some cool throwing knifes.
Fox: hey I thought they band throwing knifes.
Dexter: they were on sale. Anyways you need this katana.
Fox: im not a swordsman.
Dexter: a frying pan, some nuclear bombs my bills.
Fox: you’re Bills?!
Dexter: hey if I don’t pay these bills nobody wills.
Fox: god do I need anymore?
Dexter: condoms?
Fox: WHAT?!
Dexter: if you save Krystal she might want to “thank you”.
Fox: ok ill take them. Anyways thanks Dex.
Dexter: no problem come here next week my new special is fired egg on dead rat.
Fox: o……..k…..cya…..later…*cough* no*cough*.
Then when fox got 80 feet in the air he threw the condoms out the window.
Dexter: ugh talk about not having protection.
Chef: hey boss the rats got out.
Dexter: hey you little assholes get back here so I can kill you and cook you for next week.
Then fox left the Cornerian system and went to the planet Katina.
Where he snuck into the bunker. And found out he needs to fit in more and lose a couple pounds.




StarFox Armageddon Pt 4

After Fox snuck into the war bunker Fox realizes that he has to train some more.
Fox: I have to train more.
Falco: fox what the hell are you doing in here?
Fox: im here to help.
Falco: fox this is a restricted war area if they catch you here they’ll kill you.
Fox: if Krystal sees me looking at a woman when the woman isn’t talking she’ll give me the slowest death ever.
Falco: fox im serious. The only reason im here because I have to pay a debt.
Fox: Falco if I don’t fight this war they’ll kill Krystal.
Falco: then go for Fara Phoenix.
Fox: I don’t love her Falco I love Krystal.
Falco: then wear this.
And then Falco gives fox a hoodie with the Cornerian war symbol on it.
Falco: ok follow me don’t talk just follow.
What’s his face: soldiers its time to take a stand.
Guy in crowd: SOPY RIGHTED INFRIDGMENT!
What’s his face: SHUDUP!!!
Then what’s his face fired into the crowd and hears one scream.
What’s his face: its time to head towards victory! To do that I present to you General Salt/Pepper.
General Salt/Pepper: ok now I <laugh> is that a person with big sunglasses on? Its making me laugh so hard I think I need to shoot him.
Guy with big sunglasses on: no I need these my eyes they are humungous.
General Salt/Pepper: o well what’s next a rubber chicken. Hey what’s that is that a rubber chicken?
Guy with big sunglasses: yea it is I need it im also a comedian.
General Salt/Pepper: then I must fire in the crowd.
Then the general fires into the crowd and hears the man’s scream and a long squeak.
General Salt/Pepper: anyways here’s the plan sea bass your team will take the Landmaster Tanks.
Sea Bass: general I need water or im going to di-.
  General Salt/Pepper: well looks like Wolverine has been Promoted.
Wolverine: ok bub.
General Salt/Pepper: uh you’re a wolverine you’re not Wolverine from the X-men.
Wolverine: oh shit.
General Salt/Pepper: ok and midget your team will take the big Arwings.
Midget: but I can’t see over the dash board.
General Salt/Pepper: o well. And Falco your team takes the ground.
Falco: uh here’s the thing I can’t do ground good look at me im a falcon I want to do the air.
General Salt/Pepper: hey if your gonna keep bitching im going to fire into the crowd.
Falco: ok never mind.
General Salt/Pepper: now tomorrow we attack.
That night fox bunked in Falco’s room.
Fox poured all of Dexter’s supplies on the bed.
Falco: where the hell did you get these?
Fox: Dexter.
Falco: Oh god you went to Dexter’s diner that place is a heart attack on a stick. Oh fox.
Fox: yes Falco?
Falco: you’re on wolverine’s team. Not mine.
Fox: so im not gonna get to help you?
Falco: nope.
Fox: ok.
Falco: ok Fox get to sleep now tomorrow we strike.
Wolverine: ok bubs are you guys ready?
Soldier 1: ready.
Soldier 2: ditto.
Fox: yea what ever.
Midget: hey you seem pretty old.
Fox: no I just age fast.
Midget: ok the General told me that the Arwings have to go early.
Fox: ok let’s go.
The Arwings were miles away from the bunker everything seemed quiet until two Arwings went down.
Midget: shit we lost two fighters.
Fox: who did that?
Fox then peered in front of him and saw Wolfens coming at him.
Fox: no it’s the StarWolf team.
Wolf: hello pup im back.
Panther: so where’s Krystal McCloud.
Fox: panther leave me alone.
Leon: aww we made wittle Fox McCloud angry you want your ba-ba.
   Midget: wait your Fox McCloud?
Fox: maybe.
Midget: oh my god I know Fox McCloud this is the happiest day of my-.
Then Midget was blown to bits in the air while Fox watched.
Fox: so what he’s not going to heal.
Wolf J.R.: yea that’s sad.
General Salt/Pepper: Fox we’ve lost all the Arwings.
Fox: yea Midget is dead.
General Salt/Pepper: and we lost all the Landmaster tanks and most of our ground troop but Falco’s team is still alive no injuries for his team.
Fox: crap, don’t worry I’ve taken out the StarWolf team many times.
Wolf: you wish.
The ships were flying fast the StarWolf team’s lack of G-Diffusers gave Fox an upper hand but this was Krystal’s Arwing from the days so It was different for him.
Fox: shit how does Krystal really fly this thing?
Wolf: o well when we kill you fox Krystal will be killed as well.
Panther: wait we’re going to let Krystal die?
Leon: oh I forgot to tell you if we kill fox Oikony will kill Krystal he has her captive.
Panther: ok if that is what will happen. I must do something drastic.
Then the ships went flying around and fighting. Until Leon’s Wolfen blew up in the air.
Wolf: LEON!!
Wolf J.R: his ship was just, just I can’t describe it.
Then Wolf J.R’s Wolfen blew up.
Wolf: what the hell is going on here?
Panther: ill tell you what maybe I don’t want Krystal to get killed.
Then Panther fired and shot down Wolf.
Wolf: I HAVE to get out of here OWW GOD. My wound it has opened up again.
I can’t take it so, so much blood<cough>. I coughed blood ill never make it anyway Damn that Oikony damn him to hell.
Then as Wolf finished that sentence Wolf’s Wolfen crashed into the ground and nothing was left of it not even Wolf.
Panther: come on Fox this way. You know we’re only doing this till we get Krystal back.
Fox: you know I married her.
Panther: yes I know that I just want you to live happily with her.
Fox: what’s that?
Panther: that’s Oikony’s base come on. But you should just park stay in the Arwing, it’s very dangerous.
Fox: ok panther.
Panther and Fox then parked their Arwings; Panther got out and brought a high powered shotgun with him just incase.
Panther: Oikony are you in here? Oikony! Oh Oikony. What the hell. IF YOU DON’T COME OUT ILL FIRE AND KILL YOU!
Slippy: hey who are you?
Panther: Slippy? Is that you? What are you doing in here?
Slippy: im here to see Oikony so he can call off the war and are you going to kill him?
Panther: probably and then- wait shhh.
Then Panther can hear silent beeping in the walls.
Panther: Fuck.
Then Panther calls fox on his communicator.
Panther: FOX GET OUT OF HERE!
Fox: what?
Panther: Just do it.
Then panther trying to find the bomb Panther fires the shotgun into the walls its effective it destroys the walls. Until Panther finds the bomb but by then it was too late, when the bomb detonates and blows up the entire base killing Slippy and Panther in the blast.
Fox: Panther!
Fox was all alone not knowing that he’s all alone with Slippy gone and his son his best friend are fighting for their lives.




StarFox Armageddon the final Part.


After what happened at the fake base Fox flies off to find Krystal and with all of StarWolf dead fox can’t find the base by himself, but let’s get to the other battles.
Wolverine: COME HERE YOU ASSHOLES!
Soldier 1: crap these Landmastertanks can’t take any more- AHHHHHHH!
One of the Landmastertanks blew to tiny bits.
Wolverine: Come on Falco where’s the reinforcements?
Falco: you can’t rush perfection man.
Marcus: Falco I need more sniper ammo.
Tony: right here Mark.
Marcus: thanks.
Lucy: come on boys or do I have to show you that girls are better at combat.
Falco: crap. You guys got dissed.
Bullets flying everywhere it’s a death trap.
BOOM!
Falco: cannons they’ve got cannons.
Tony: ill show you guys that toads are the greatest combat things of all time.
Falco: uh Tony use the gun and no running from the blockade and-.
Then all of the sudden giant lasers by the cannons were coming towards the blockade.
Falco: GET THE HELL OUT OF HERE!
Lucy: crap my grandpa’s not going to be happy about this.
The team ran from the blockade then to another while an entire troop was hit by the blast and was disintegrated.
Falco: shit Marcus use that remote controlled rocket.
Marcus: with gusto.
Then Marcus uses the remote controlled rocket to hit the giant machine.
Marcus: whoa Falco I love these rockets.
Falco: don’t get too cocky kid.
Tony: when doesn’t he he’s a McCloud.
BOOM!
Another cannon hit the blockade throwing Lucy, Falco, Tony, and Marcus about 20 feet away.
Marcus: im going to be feeling that in the morning.
Falco: Kid when you’ve been battling as long as I have you get used to it. Hell I was in the Super Smash Bros. Tournament.
Tony: Ow my head. Are you sure this is safe Falco?
Falco: nope I’ve been a follower all the time until now.
Falco said when he was aiming at an enemy. Then he fired the sniper and hit a plasma generator thus blowing up a giant mother ship.
Falco: oh yea that’s awesome lets see you do that Marcus.
Marcus: I would if you didn’t blow the entire thing up.
Wolverine: hey lookout behind you.
Wolverine then shot a laser at an enemy ship.
Marcus: whoa thanks Wolverine.
Wolverine: no problem bub.
Then an Aparoid came and destroyed the entire Landmaster.
Falco: shit I thought they all died.
Marcus: ill get it.
Falco: no kid these things are hard to kill. Marcus from now on you’re the leader.
Marcus: what?
Falco: im going to kill this thing by myself I need to prove to my self that I don’t need a team to help me kill these things. I don’t even know if ill come back or not Marcus SO GO!
Marcus: Falco you’re the best.
Falco: thanks kid.
After the three kids left Falco took off his own armor to fight it hand to hand.
Falco: ok you can go back to your true form.
Shape Shifter: aww how did you know.
Falco: I can smell you a mile away you were my friend before this war started.
Shape Shifter: well yes I was also the one who attacked Katt Monroe and her team so sad no survivors.
Falco: you die now.
Falco and the Shape Shifter battle to the death can the Shape Shifter take on a trained martial artist and can Falco take on a guy who can make himself turn to anything he wants. Falco throws a series of attacks on the Shape shifter Falco tries to take him out with a spinning back flip kick while then the Shape Shifter turns into Fox and talks with Falco.
Fox: Falco what are you doing you wouldn’t want to kill me now would ya huh?
Falco: no I would never kill my best friend. Then Falco cracks him in the nuts.
Falco: and you’re not my best friend.
Shape Shifter: aww fuck you.
Then the shape shifter falls to the ground in pain and cant move.
Falco: now its time for me to get Marcus and-.
Then Falco sees that Marcus never left he was watching the entire fight Falco just smiled at Marcus until Falco felt a shard pain in his stomach and I mean shard.
Falco looks down and finds out he has been impaled by the shape shifter who turned his hand into a blade. Then the shape shifter takes the blade out Falco then fell to the ground.
Falco: Marcus……..RUN……NOW.
Marcus: FALCO!
Shape Shifter: aww we had an audience not for long.
The shape shifter ran towards Marcus until Marcus pulled a blaster and shot the shape shifter in the face. Then Marcus ran to Falco.
Marcus: Falco you can’t leave me.
Falco: Marcus you have <cough> keep fighting. Tell Fox and Krystal im sorry for all my mistakes; now go leave me to die.
Marcus: Falco you’re the best.
Falco: I know.
Marcus then left Falco over where he dropped.
Falco: Marcus I know you can do this, Katt im sorry.
Then finally Falco died from the massive blood lost.
Marcus then joined Lucy and Tony back at the battle field.
Tony: hey where’s Falco?
Marcus: he didn’t make it. He died.
Lucy: oh my gosh.
Marcus: I know how are we even going to survive without Falco, he’s the only reason we made it this far.

Hours after Fox abandoned Panther he finally found the actual base.
Fox: there it is.
Fox then parked his Arwing and entered the base he brought the Katana Dexter gave him.
Fox: Oikony Where are you I got a surprise for you.
Then fox looked into the distance and saw a door. That looked like a dungeon so he thought Krystal would be in there. Fox entered the dungeon and saw a cell; fox looked inside it and saw Krystal being restrained with shackles and her gagged.
Fox opened the door and took the gag off her.
Fox: finally hearing the sound of your voice will give me pleaser.
Krystal: Fox it’s a trap.
Fox: that’s not as pleasant as I thought it would be.
Then fox felt a pain on the back of his head and everything went black to him.
When fox awoke he felt that he couldn’t move he was bound to a chair, and he looked to his side and saw Krystal also bound to a chair.
Fox: Krystal what happened?
Krystal: I don’t know.
Fox: well we have to get out crap my katana. It’s gone.
Oikony: hello Fox McCloud, and Krystal McCloud, I thought that blow to the head would have killed you.
What’s his face: you know that’s not a good way to treat our hostages.
Fox: What’s his face? You’re behind this?
Andross: no just call me Andross im his son.
Oikony: yes but you will all bow down to ANDREW OIKONY!! <BAM> UNCLE ANDROSS!!
Andross: he’s dead.
Fox: why would you kill your cousin?
Andross: im not right in the head I LOVE wars that’s why I started this one. Right now your son is getting killed.
And you know that false base Panther went in? so was your friend Slippy Toad.
Fox: you monster when I get free ill kill you.
Krystal: fox.
Andross: that’s why im going to leave this base with a bomb.
Fox: oh no if I die you die with me bitch.
Andross: shut up your going to die in about five minutes.
Andross then left the base.
Fox: crap Krystal how are we going to get free.
Krystal: oh just to tell you when Oikony was killed I freed myself I tried to whisper it to you but I didn’t have a chance.
Fox: thanks Krystal. Now lets get that bitch, let me get my katana ok I got it.
Fox and Krystal got into the Arwing and followed Oikony.
Krystal: fox its too tight in here.
Fox: so was your old uniform and that never stopped you.
Fox then landed at a battle ground.
Fox: Krystal you take this Arwing back to Cornaria ill meet you back at home.
Krystal: wait fox.
Fox: yea?
Then Krystal gave fox a kiss on the lips the kiss lasted a couple seconds until Krystal pulled her lips away.
Krystal: for luck.
Fox: thanks ill chop his head off for you.
Krystal: thanks.
Fox then started towards a base.
Andross: ok we need to escape towards MacBeth.
Soldier: ok master.
Fox: not so fast bitch.
Fox then unshieded his Katana.
Fox: this is your last time to live.
Andross: so who wants to see the killer of my father get what’s coming to him.
The fight started fox slashed at Andross; he felt no pain the fight raged on until Fox broke his katana trying to stab Andross.
Andross: its armor asshole ever heard of it?
Fox: you’re dead.
Fox punched Andross but Andross grabbed his hand and Fox then got shocked with a lightning shock.
Fox: what the hell.
Andross: im doing kind of like my father did with these neural receptors to the left it shocks the other explodes stuff. Im a triple threat.
Fox: triple?
Andross: im a good tap dancer.
Fox: Frick off bitch.
Fox then pulled a gun and fired at the neural receptors.
Andross: crap now im a single threat.
Fox: yea now you should feel this.
Fox then did a series of fast attacks that made Andross feel like a piece of crap.
Andross: no please I don’t want to die please give me mercy GIVE ME MERCY!
Fox: no there will be no mercy.
Soldier: COPY RIGHTED INFRINDGEMENT!
Fox: your lucky im fighting Andross or I’d fire on you.
Then fox finds a poll and goes up to Andross.
Fox: have you ever danced with the devil at the moonlight?
Soldier: COPY RIGHTED INFRINDGEMENT!
Fox: please shut up. Now die Andross.
Then fox takes the poll and shoves it in Andross’s face he died instantly.

Fox: after Andross was killed the war was officially over I went home and saw that Marcus, Tony, and Lucy survived Krystal made it home in one piece. But I got the bad news about what happened to Falco. At his funeral I saw Katt she survived after all she just got the news she was devastated and so was Amanda when she heard from the battlefield that Slippy also didn’t make it.
30 years later the new StarFox team lost their lives in a battle. Me and Krystal were stricken with sadness when the funeral was over I visited Falco I never got to tell him he was my best friend before he left our world. We showed our feelings to each other through arguments. I was standing and crying over Falco Lombardi’s grave an ace pilot a good fighter and a very good friend. I thought I felt his hands on my shoulders I looked behind and saw Krystal who then brought me home I lost my leg to Andross and so I had more time to spend with Krystal. We grew old together no more wars no more violence and that’s what happened and that’s the end of this story.
©2006-2009 ~Crystalishawt
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This is the story of 18 years after starfox command it was in five parts i was going to release them one at a time then i said screw that im doing it all together and there are some swears its all calm at the begining until the violence starts

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Wow... trhat may have been long but it was very good

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hey you dont know how long this took me I was going to put this in parts where it was 5 parts I did in word which took three pages on each part next time you see this count how many times someone says copyrighted infringment and how many times people fire into the crowd

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wow....

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Not bad, but I've read better. If you want my honest opinion, you could really have done with an editor on this. Right now the format makes it seem only half-finished.

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what I think I was high when I wrote this what do you expect

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Had you found someone to do some proper editing of the story (or managed it yourself), the results would have been a lot better. You don't even include how the characters are speaking or even adequate descriptions of what's happening or what the environment is like. If you were to include those, the quality would increase dramatically. Good description is key to good writing. You can only go so far with just the character-name-colon-speech approach, if you want to go far, you need to include small actions and descriptions along with the dialogue. Dialogue alone does not make for much of a story. Your readers need information to be able to visualise what's going on, such as what the locations look like, the little actions the characters perform and even how the characters speak.

When I was reading this, I only managed to work with generic locations when visualising the world and generic templates for the characters and objects. Details are important. You need to provide enough information that your readers can craft an immersive world from it in their minds. It's like comparing a rough line drawing with a beautiful 3D rendered image of the same scene.

I hope I've given you enough advice to allow you to improve on this story.

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:cries: this is the saddest longest story I ever read. :cries:

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That, this is I call a pretty good fan-fiction !
Sad, but awesome =)

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